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April Tanka Month! Tanka Discussion 1:

Thu Apr 3, 2008, 2:52 PM
In keeping with the April Tanka Awareness month, I have decided to complement my tanka deviations with some of my ideas concerning modern tanka. :D Keep in mind that definitions of the art may vary depending upon the artist, but to truly know tanka...you must experience it :D

Originating in Japan during the Heian period, tanka is well over 1200 years old. Tanka began as the standard lyric poem of Japanese literature. Like classic haiku, tanka was composed of structured metrical units. These units were 5 lines in a format of 5-7-5-7-7. Observing the principles of brevity (albeit in a much more fluid manner than haiku), tanka consist of no more than 31 sound symbols (similar to syllables in English). In the Heian period of Japan, while haiku was considered the poetry of the middle class (merchants, commoners, etc), tanka was associated with aristocracy and was often complemented with music.

Today, modern tanka has undergone many transformations in both definition and structure. Although the form structure of 5 lines is still regularly observed, modern tanka often eschews the sound symbol structure of the classic verse.

F.Y.I- I have seen tanka composed of four lines that work equally well.

In my opinion, the most important aspects of tanka are not the play-by-play historical facts, but rather the principles of the art itself.

According to haijin Pat Shelley, Tanka can embrace all of human experience in its brief space with emotions of love, pity, suffering, loneliness, or death, expressed in the simplest language. :peace:

Tanka incorporates metaphor, line breaks, ellipses, and other techniques to emphasize
human emotion. Where the expression of emotion in haiku is subtle, tanka is very overt and flowing...:nod:

That is all for now. There will be 4 journal updates after this one. Each discussing a various aspect of Tanka style poetry. :D

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:iconnot-the-actress:
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I try to stick with the 5 7 5 7 7 structure simply because it poses a sort of challenge to pick words appropriately and be really conscious of what you're writing. I see it as a form of discipline that I try not to deviate from unless absolutely necessary and if keeping at it will take away from what I'm saying.
Wonderful journal entry!
:iconlaurence55:
Thank you! Yes, I am very much the opposite :D I stay far away from the classic format, and prefer to emphasize the principles of brevity, awareness, and flow within the tanka structure. Each approach is valid in my opinion if it helps the artist reach a deeper level of self understanding. :D
:iconlivingtoxic:
I try to think of it as short/long/short/long/long and I try to incoporate a "pivot" line in tanka.

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:iconlaurence55:
Yes, pivot lines shifting from an image to the emotion of the speaker are always a good technique. I incorporate them as well, and to a slightly lesser extent, the short/long concept.
:iconlivingtoxic:
What I read about pivot lines are that a tanka is composed of 2 segments. For example, if the third line is the pivot line, it joins the first segment with the second. Therefore, the first lines can be a 'haiku' in this aspect (with the third line as the pivot line), and line 3, 4 and 5 is another 'haiku' (with line3, pivot line as the first line).

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:iconlaurence55:
Yes, I have read something similar (the upper/lower segment of tanka). This is true in most cases...hmmm (trying to think of examples of exceptions in modern tanka). This is a tanka by a haijin named Jim Doss. It is one of the few in which the pivot line is slightly more obscure.

potato-eyes
stare back at me
from freshly dug holes
I cover them with dirt
await the resurrection

I prefer incorporating the use of the pivot line for a cleaner transition in the form. However I sometimes deviate from this concept myself if i am trying to attain the emotion in one instance, without a contrast between image and thought.
:iconaqua-rat:
I very much appreciated this description of the tanka form. I hope to have a go at it myself.

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Yes, tanka is absolutely beautiful! You should :D
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Wow, I can honestly say I learned something today.
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