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Senryu Series 4
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Literature Text
1.
faking a call
to avoid the wino's
sob story
2.
passing a porn shop
we talk straight-faced
about God
3.
fired from work
he turns
to Buddha
4.
the hooker
promises him
"no tricks"
5.
a warm welcome
from the clerk
behind plexiglass
6.
corporate shift
the new boss hums
Jay-Z
7.
depressed economy-
we settle for
a quickie
faking a call
to avoid the wino's
sob story
2.
passing a porn shop
we talk straight-faced
about God
3.
fired from work
he turns
to Buddha
4.
the hooker
promises him
"no tricks"
5.
a warm welcome
from the clerk
behind plexiglass
6.
corporate shift
the new boss hums
Jay-Z
7.
depressed economy-
we settle for
a quickie
This will be a 7 day series of senryu style poetry. This is not linked verse, just random submissions.
© 2008 - 2024 Laurence55
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Fellow Haiku Artist...
This Senryu series is extraordinarily beautiful!!!! THIS IS INCREDIBLE!!!!
Ever since diving deep into the world of "waka" I've been finding Haiku / Senryu / Tanka to be more beautiful than what I originally thought it was. I'm getting much better at it, myself.
But I don't think that I could ever stack up to being as good as you are at it. This is beautiful.
This Senryu series is extraordinarily beautiful!!!! THIS IS INCREDIBLE!!!!
Ever since diving deep into the world of "waka" I've been finding Haiku / Senryu / Tanka to be more beautiful than what I originally thought it was. I'm getting much better at it, myself.
But I don't think that I could ever stack up to being as good as you are at it. This is beautiful.