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Senryu Series 10
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1.
home from war
her husband's fuse
shorter
2.
pledge of allegiance
the foreign kid
stands first
3.
immigrant neighbors
we send over
a fruitcake
4.
custody battle...
a new pair of shoes
from Dad
5.
sushi party
the house cat friendly
with everyone
6.
moonlight
climbing the trellis
secret lover
7.
opening act
the stripper removes
her wedding ring
8.
immigration debate
my father's accent
returns
8(b)
moving day
the neighbor waves
from my lawnmower
9.
before work
the secretary's
real voice
10.
meditation class
my sister hums
a rock song
11.
1st base
she adds my name
on Facebook
12.
haiku reading
between the lines
someone's cough
13.
class reunion
the cheerleader rallies
her kids
14.
payday...
the bills arrive
a week early
15.
empty park
I take my turn
on the swing set
-complete-
home from war
her husband's fuse
shorter
2.
pledge of allegiance
the foreign kid
stands first
3.
immigrant neighbors
we send over
a fruitcake
4.
custody battle...
a new pair of shoes
from Dad
5.
sushi party
the house cat friendly
with everyone
6.
moonlight
climbing the trellis
secret lover
7.
opening act
the stripper removes
her wedding ring
8.
immigration debate
my father's accent
returns
8(b)
moving day
the neighbor waves
from my lawnmower
9.
before work
the secretary's
real voice
10.
meditation class
my sister hums
a rock song
11.
1st base
she adds my name
on Facebook
12.
haiku reading
between the lines
someone's cough
13.
class reunion
the cheerleader rallies
her kids
14.
payday...
the bills arrive
a week early
15.
empty park
I take my turn
on the swing set
-complete-
This will be a series of senryu poetry
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Re-readin these - so many good poems here man. So many!!!! #1, #2, #3, #4 - all stunning. I love the sadness of the humour in those three - a melancholic wit - almost bittersweet. #7, #8 and #9 - man, again so good. Anyway - so much to find in these poems.