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Dick and Laurence Renku-2

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end of summer
the deflated wheel
of a tricycle

(L)


first day of spring
the prostitute forces a smile

(D)


mountain rain
the laughter
of grandchildren

(L)


no moon tonight
the cleaners plan a strike

(D)


autumn returns
wild geese
in the same letter

(L)


after the stroke
she calls me 'Michael'

(D)


coming solstice
my mother checks
for lumps

(L)


earthquake over
the spider rebuilds its web

(D)


childhood photo
a father
I don't recognize

(L)


another year older
the morepork's song

(D)


first star
the infant's grip
tightens

(L)


construction site
sparrows play

(D)


sleeve weather
a raven slips
into clouds

(L)


last week of tutorials
the roof springs a leak

(D)


Indian summer
the beggar tries
my door

(L)


collapsed mine
the pub falls silent

(D)


Thanksgiving dinner
we mute the program
on Indians

(L)


sniffing her panties
summer heat

(D)


no name
in the thrift store coat
first snow

(L)


sudden downpour
the hills disappear

(D)


crackdown
on Atlanta homeless
December wind

(L)


first Christmas alone
the snow so deep

(D)


the youngest
pregnant again...
winter solstice

(L)
This will be a renku played between me and Dick Whyte ~SOLARTS. The main purpose of this renku is to play and test ideas we've been working on for our upcoming book on haiku theory.

We will be writing the renku in the comments section and then I will update this deviation regularly to include the new entries. :heart:

We are in different seasons in our respective areas.

Our earlier renku can be seen here...[link]
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the-beastie's avatar
this is a wonderful collection. there is such a mix of emotions in here, with some very pathos pieces (the stroke haiku particularly touched a heartstring for me), and ideas of freshness, hope and joy coming through beautifully too. wonderful work from both of you :heart: